Payotee's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alien Takeover (2:20)]

Slammin'

This is definately one of the better electronic pieces i've heard on newgrounds. It's put together very nicely, is well equalized, and has a lot of great melodic elementst to say just a few things. You're intro was also really cool the way u layered all those samples and sound effects. You also avoided the cheese factor really well which is hard to do when composing electronic music. Being a composer myself I know how hard it is. The only suggestions i have for this song is to make it longer and work on bringing out the kick drum a little. With a little more work i could definately see this being played on the chillout floor at a club.....or not.

[Come to blows with about 3 men]

catchy

This is actually pretty good. The beat's really cool and u progressed to new ones really smoothly. The only thing is you should probably layer more melodic elements to give the audio more depth. Like throw in the bass line along with the guitar towards the end or put in some sick melody at the beginning with the bassline. Maybe u wanted it to be more minimalist so didn't have too many elements going at the same time, the suggestions are just me. I could see this working in a really dark, violent, shootemup scene. Good job.

[Charge!]

try again

okay did u write anything at all in this song or did u spend 5 minutes layering the 3 audible loops? Maybe if you actually put some time and effort into writing a song it wouldn't be this bad. There are other cheezy songs in the audio portal and some work, some don't. This one doesn't. You also can't just loop something over a breakbeat and expect it to be anything worth listening to. Go back and try again.

CRISPY-D responds:

yo D.A. (dumbass)

most of the songs i make take hours
to make..... for this project...
i wanted to make something simple
and catchy, but not be stupid.
i was ispired by the drum and bass loop for the old pico page....
so if u want something with effort....
listen to my other songs....
but like i said.... it was meant to be
SIMPLE...not complex