good start
It's alright. You could do a lot more with it and the way you put it together sounds like it's one of your first songs. The sounds were a little muffled and some of your tracks didn't really add to the song in a good way. Like that percussion/bassline thing at the beginning kind of hurt my ears and the way you doubled up the melody line in the bass part wasn't all that creative. Sorry to tear your song up like that, but I'm saying all this because I really think there are some good points. The melody was fantastic and if you wrote it yourself I think it's pretty incredible. It sounds trancey and the phasing goes with it nicely.
If it's your first song it's a good start and you could develope your composition skills a lot if you keep at it. Keep that melody line for another song cuz when you get good at making music, it would make a good foundation for a song.